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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010 KB50
Two pie charts provide information about client services' rate, which ranked with questionnaires according to the guests’ responses in 2005 and 2010. The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010 There were sharply in two various client interest rate portion over 5 year timeframes. However, good standard accounted for only 14 percent of leveling in 2005, it peaked at the 39 percentage in 2010 which was highest of that year. The largest increasing was observed in Excellent rating. Although this level was the lowest of rating only 5 percent in 2005, it increased significantly and reached to 28 percent over the next five year. In contrast, rest of the other three level rating had decreased between 2005 and 2010. Although almost half of customers gave the hotel’s service a satisfactory rating in 2005 which was higher than other 4 ratings, it dropped dramatically to 17 percent. Also, both poor and extremely poor levels followed the same decreasing pattern, reaching 12 and 4 percent, respectively.
Two pie charts provide information about client services' rate, which ranked with questionnaires according to the guests’ responses in 2005 and 2010.

The charts below
show
the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was
given
to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010

There were
sharply
in two various client interest rate portion over 5 year timeframes.
However
,
good
standard accounted for
only
14
percent
of leveling in 2005, it peaked at the 39 percentage in 2010 which was highest of that year. The largest increasing
was observed
in Excellent
rating
. Although this level was the lowest of
rating
only
5
percent
in 2005, it increased
significantly
and reached to 28
percent
over the
next
five year.

In contrast
, rest of the other three level
rating
had decreased between 2005 and 2010. Although almost half of customers gave the hotel’s service a satisfactory
rating
in 2005 which was higher than other 4
ratings
, it dropped
dramatically
to 17
percent
.
Also
, both poor and
extremely
poor levels followed the same decreasing pattern, reaching 12 and 4
percent
,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010

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