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The charts above demonstrate three different of desert stats

The charts above demonstrate three different of desert stats kg192
The Charts above demonstrate three deserts stats and the stats are about, average annual rainfall, average temperature, and the extreme temperature situation. The first chart from the top belongs to the Sahara desert, which is the biggest desert with nine millions kilometers between two other deserts at the charts. This desert also has the highest record of temperature by 58C degrees. The next desert on the charts is the Taklimakan desert which had the lowest temperature record by -26. 1C, also the average temperature in winter is -9C. Thus the Taklimakan desert is the coldest desert between the charts. The Great Basin Desert has the same average temperature as the Sahra desert. The average temperature is 30C in summer but in comparison to other deserts on the charts, it has the highest level of average annual rainfall by 5. 1-51cm in the north. So it is clear, The Taklimakan is the coldest and the Sahra desert is the biggest in size but the Great Basin desert has the most moisture by the great level of rainfall.
The
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above demonstrate three deserts stats and the stats are about,
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annual rainfall,
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temperature
, and the extreme
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situation.

The
first
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from the top belongs to the Sahara
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desert
, which is the biggest
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with nine millions kilometers between two other deserts at the
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. This
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desert
also
has the highest record of
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by 58C degrees.

The
next
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on the
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is the
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Taklimakan
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which had the lowest
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record by -26. 1C,
also
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in winter is -9C.
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Taklimakan
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is the coldest
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between the charts.

The Great Basin
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has the same
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as the
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Sahra
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. The
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is 30C in summer
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in comparison
to other deserts on the
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, it has the highest level of
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annual rainfall by 5. 1
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-51cm
in the north.

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the Great Basin
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has the most moisture by the great level of rainfall.
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