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The bar chart illustrates the quantity of cell phones and home phones per 100 users in seven selected countries. Overall, it can be seen that cell phones are by far the most popular item in Italy while Denmark comes top with the highest number of home phones users. Germany, the UK, Sweden and Italy are four instances where most citizens ( at least 70 peoples per 100) use mobile phones. One notable case is in Italy, in which the quantity of mobile is twice as many as this of land lines at 90 users per 100 compared to about 43 in land lines. In contrast, the gap in popularity between the two types of telephones is less remarkable in Germany where its mobile users are slightly larger than the home phones’. Conversely, in other nations, namely Canada and the US, the use of home phones are much more popular than cell phones. Another country in which this pattern occurs is in Denmark, where the number of mobile users and land line users is relatively equal.

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