Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Line Graph : Regional household recycling rates

Line Graph: Regional household recycling rates M7Wp
The graph gives information about how many percentages of regional household recycling rates increased over a ten year period. From the graph we can see that in Germany, regional household recycling rates increase gradually from 2005 to 2009, rise sharply in 2011 and go up steadily from 2011 to 2015. In the UK, regional household recycling rates go up gradually from 2005 to 2007 but it stabilises at 40% until 2009, but from 2009 to 2011, it rises sharply and increases steadily from 2011 to 2015. On the other hand, in France, from 2005 it drops dramatically from 50% to 30% until 2013. After a significant fall, it rises sharply to 40% from 2013 to 2015.
The graph gives information about how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
percentages of regional household recycling rates increased over a
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "ten-year"
ten year
period.

From the graph we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that in Germany, regional household recycling rates increase
gradually
from 2005 to 2009, rise
sharply
in 2011 and go up
steadily
from 2011 to 2015.

In the UK, regional household recycling rates go up
gradually
from 2005 to 2007
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it
Possible spelling mistake. 'stabilises' is British English.
stabilises
at 40% until 2009,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
from 2009 to 2011, it rises
sharply
and increases
steadily
from 2011 to 2015.

On the other hand
, in France, from 2005 it drops
dramatically
from 50% to 30% until 2013. After a significant fall, it rises
sharply
to 40% from 2013 to 2015.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Line Graph: Regional household recycling rates

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
116 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Line Graph : Regional household recycling rates