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The chart shows the transportation of different types prefer among young people who are living in different nations.

The chart shows the transportation of different types prefer among young people who are living in different nations. j5gAX
The provided bar charts illustrate the date of various types of transportation amid young people who are from different regions. Units are measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that the maximum number of people used the car transportation while the least number of people have to use a motorcycle. Looking at the graph in detail, the people of the Great Britain are using 60 percent of the car transportaion. Follow by motorcycle is an almost 10 percent and bicycle is an almost 30 percent. However, the united states of America have used a car transportation which accounted for half. In contrast, for motorcycle and bicycle, they have ranged between 10 and 30 percent, respectively. Analyzing the other countries, the citizens of Germany who are using more car and bicycle for transportation, it is accounted for 40 percent while the mode of motorcycle which is the minimal preferred by the Germany that is accounted for 12 percent. Nevertheless, the use of the car transportation is an above 70 percent in France. On the other hand, the transportation of the bicycle and motorcycle, both are using rarely by France crowd which is accounted for 10 and 12 percent, accordingly.
The provided bar charts illustrate the date of various types of
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different
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seen
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while the least number of
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use
a motorcycle.

Looking at the graph in detail, the
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people
of the Great Britain are using 60
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percent
of the
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car
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transportaion
. Follow by motorcycle is an almost 10
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percent
and
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bicycle
is an almost 30
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, the
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united states of America
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used
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car
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transportation
which
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accounted
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In contrast
, for motorcycle and
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bicycle
, they have ranged between 10 and 30
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percent
,
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.

Analyzing the other countries, the citizens of Germany who are using more
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bicycle
for
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transportation
, it is
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accounted
for 40
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percent
while the mode of motorcycle which is the minimal preferred by the Germany
that is
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accounted
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transportation
is an above 70
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percent
in France.
On the other hand
, the
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transportation
of the
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bicycle
and motorcycle, both are using rarely by France crowd which is
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,
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