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the consumption of three spread between 1981 to 2017

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The line graph provides the data about the amount of three kinds of spreads: margarine, low fat and reduced spreads and butter which were eaten up between 1981 and 2007 and is measured in grams. The most significant facts to emerge from the graph are that the consumption of butter and margarine declined at the end of the period, while the use of low fat and reduced spreads which were introduced in 1996 climbed significantly. There was a dramatic fall in the consumption of butter and margarine. The amount of butter used stood at 140 grams in the year 1981 but gradually decreased until it hit a low of 50 grams in 2007. Likewise, margarine started with 90 grams consumed at the start of the year after which the figure fluctuated slightly and dropped to 40 grams at the final year of this period, the lowest amount of all three spreads. On the one hand, between 1996 and 2001, there was a dramatic growth in the utilization of low fact and reduced spreads which was followed by a steady decrease at the end of timeframe.
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and
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and
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margarine
declined at the
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end
of the period, while the
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
which
were introduced
in 1996 climbed
significantly
. There was a dramatic fall in the consumption of
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butter
and
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margarine
. The amount of
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grams
in the year 1981
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gradually
decreased until it hit a
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of 50
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in 2007.

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,
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started
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consumed at the
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start
of the year after which the figure fluctuated
slightly
and dropped to 40
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at the final year of this period, the lowest amount of all three spreads.

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fact and
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