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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. pxW0
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of women and men who cleared their driving exam in a particular Asian country from 1980 to 2010. Overall, it could be observed that women were more successful in the exam relative to men. Furthermore, the most significant increase in the percentage who passed the driving exam for both men and women was from 1990 to 2000. There is a general increase in women's passing rate from 1980 to 2000, but there is a decrease from 2000 to 2010. Moreover, a similar trend could be observed in men's cases, but men's passing rates seem similar in 2000 and 2010. Interestingly, the jump in the percentage of women who passed the driving exam from 1980 to 1990 is much smaller when compared to the percentage of men who passed the test in the similar time period. Additionally, the lowest rate of women who passed driving test is almost identical to the highest rate of men who cleared the driving test, both being approximately 48 percent.
The bar chart illustrates the
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exam in a particular Asian country from 1980 to 2010.
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women
were more successful in the exam relative to
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the
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exam for both
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and
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was from 1990 to 2000.

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from 1980 to 2000,
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there is a decrease from 2000 to 2010.
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's cases,
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's passing
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seem similar in 2000 and 2010.

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, the jump in the
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passed
the
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exam from 1980 to 1990 is much smaller when compared to the
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of
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men
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in the similar time period.
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, the lowest
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rate
of
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women
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who
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passed
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driving
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is almost identical to the highest
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, both being approximately 48 percent.

IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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