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The chart shows percentage of male and female at six educational setting

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The bar chart shows information about the amount of man and woman teachers in six different type of educational setting in the UK in 2010As can be seen from this figure, in two of six educational setting which include nursery Pre-school and primary school, female otnumbered than male. Maybe it is because female teachers usually adore kids. Especially, the gender gap between them was particularly in the field of Nursery Pre school where there were nearly twenty times as numerous women teachers as men teachers. At secondary school, female teachers still dominated. But the amount of men was increased more. Only at the fields of college, total of number teacher were nearby. Besign priviate training in stitute, man were outnumbered than woman, but not much different. Contrary to Nursery, at university, the percentage of male teachers were three times than female. Because, base on some research, men were more intelligent than women. Overall, the chart indicates that at UK in 2010, most educational setting related to child, continue to be female-dominated. However, related academics or higly knowledge male were significant spence crowd.
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