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The chart shows number of students who choose different subjects at university in 2005.

The chart shows number of students who choose different subjects at university in 2005. 85G6B
The bar chart shows the numbers of students who chose to study different university subjects in 2005. The numbers for each subject are divided into male and female students are showing some general differences between men's and women's choice of subjects. Science and maths were the most popular choices for male students in 2005, but non-scientific subjects were more popular with female students. The most popular subjects for female students were less technical subjects such as social sciences, languages, literature and humanities. Social sciences were by far the most popular subject for women. However, very few female students chose to study mathematics and law four and six thousand students respectively. Almost no men only two thousand chose to study languages and very few men chose the arts. However, just as many men as women chose to study humanities.
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mathematics and law four and six thousand
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