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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990-2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990-2010. W77q
This chart illustrates the information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for 20 years. Age group of 36-50 had donated the most in 1990. People in 1990 had donated more than people in 2010. The age group of 18-25 had donated the least of 6% in 2010. The percentage slightly increases from 18-25 to 36-50 of 42% and 35% in both years and suddenly decreases in 51-65Age group over 65 donated more than 18-25 but less than age group of 36-50. In 2010 the percentage slightly inceases from age group 18-25 to 51-65 and had a sudden fall of above 65 whereas 1990 had a fall from 51-65 age group. The overall pattern shows that people in 1990 contributed more than people in 2010.
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of 36-50 had
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of 18-25 had
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the least of 6% in 2010. The percentage
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suddenly
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over 65
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18-25 to 51-65 and had a sudden fall of above 65 whereas 1990 had a fall from 51-65
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990-2010.

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