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The chart below shows the proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998

The chart below shows the proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998 n22e

The spreadsheet vividly shows the information regarding the percentile of money which was utilized on food, music, electronic equipment, and, lastly, videos, by both adults and wards, in the United Kingdom in 1998. Overall, the most outstanding feature is that adults spent less of their whole income on the four items as compared to the children, who spent most of what money they had. As is presented in the tabular graph, a quarter of income was utilized on the foodstuffs. In the case of electronic units and music, young ones showed similar interest to expend merely 5% and a negligible amount of money was spent on music. Both men and women spent a 5% income on it. Furthermore, on foodstuffs, the former expend only 14% whereas the latter spent more or less threefold part of the money as compared to the men. Men and women were insignificant ranging between 0. 5% and 2% in the case of videos. Moving further, the percentile of income used for buying music by children, boys and girls were the highest at approximately 40%. By contrast, Children, boys, and girls were spending just between 9 and 11% on meals. With regard to electronic equipment, wards spent the highest percentage of income overall at 23%. The boys were more fascinated with purchasing videos just as 18% and girls were one percent less than boys.

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