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The line graph provides information about the household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015.

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The line graph provides information about the household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycle rates of the UK and Germany had a steady but significant rise over the period, while the percentage of recycled waste in France experienced a downward trend. In 2005 the recycle rates of the UK and Germany was 35% and 20% respectively. Germany’s rates increased sharply throughout the period, exceeding France’s rate in 2009 and reaching almost 60% at the end of the period. In the meantime, the percentage of recycled waste in the UK grew to 40% in 2007 and remained steady until 2009. During 2009-2011 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with a gradual increase to 60% in 2015. In early 2005 the recycling rate of France was 50% which accounted for the highest rate among these three countries. However, it dramatically declined to 30% in 2013. Then, there was a growth of 10% in 2015, but France's rate was the lowest at the end of the period.
The line graph provides information about the household recycling
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rates
in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015.

Overall
, the recycle
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rates
of the UK and Germany had a steady
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significant rise over the
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period
, while the percentage of recycled waste in France experienced a downward trend.

In 2005 the recycle
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rates
of the UK and Germany was 35% and 20%
respectively
. Germany’s
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rates
increased
sharply
throughout the
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, exceeding France’s
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rate
in 2009 and reaching almost 60% at the
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of the
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. In the meantime, the percentage of recycled waste in the UK grew to 40% in 2007 and remained steady until 2009. During 2009-2011 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with a gradual increase to 60% in 2015.

In early 2005 the recycling
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rate
of France was 50% which accounted for the highest
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among these three countries.
However
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declined to 30% in 2013. Then, there was a growth of 10% in 2015,
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France's
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was the lowest at the
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