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The charts explained the value of the one country was exported in various categories during in 2015 as well as 2016. Moreover, the table illustrated the percentage change in each category of exported in 2016 compared with 2015. First, the bar chart of petroleum products in 2016 was rose from 2015 that was 3%. Chart of Engineered goods in 2016 was increased from 2015 that was 8. 5%. On the contrary gems and jewelry chart in 2016 was declined from 2015 at 5. 18%. That is only one chart that decreased. Agricultural products were climbed at 0. 81%. The last chart is textiles was grown at 15. 24% that was the chart most rose from 2015. In summary, the bar chart was most increased is Textiles that rose at 15. 24%. Moreover, the chart that was less grown is agricultural products that increased at 081%. In due the fact it has one chart that decreased is gems and jewelry.
The
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the value of the one country
was exported
in various categories during in 2015
as well
as 2016.
Moreover
, the table illustrated the percentage
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change
in each category of exported in 2016 compared with 2015.

First
, the bar
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chart
of petroleum products in 2016 was rose from 2015 that was 3%.
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Chart
of Engineered
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goods
in 2016
was increased
from 2015 that was 8. 5%.
On the contrary
gems and jewelry
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chart
in 2016
was declined
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from 2015 at 5
. 18%.
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one
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chart
that decreased. Agricultural products
were climbed
at 0. 81%. The last
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chart
is textiles
was grown
at 15. 24% that was the
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chart
most rose from 2015.

In summary, the bar
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chart
was most increased is Textiles that rose at 15. 24%.
Moreover
, the
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chart
that was less grown is agricultural products that increased at 081%. In due the fact it has one
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chart
that decreased is gems and jewelry.
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