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The chart show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010

The chart show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 Dl2Y6
The chart compares the percentages of British students in England who were capable of speaking other languages apart from English over the period of 10 years (2000 and 2010). The is clearly evident that in the year 2010, Spanish was the most spoken foreign language by the British students at the university with 30% in number. After a decade, in 2010, the percentage increased by 5% Apart from Spanish, German and French were other two languages spoken by the students. However, the percentage was comparitively lower than Spanish in both the years. In the year 2000, 20% of the students did not speak any other foreign language. However, the percentage decreased by 10% in the year 2010. The perctage of students who spoke another language was 15% in the year 2000 while it increased by 5% after a decade. Similarily, the students who could speak two or more languages increased from 10 to 15% in 2010. Overall 80% of the students at the university knew other languages apart from English which increased over the 10 year period leaving only 10% of the students monolingual.
The chart compares the
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percentages
of British
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students
in England who were capable of speaking
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other
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languages
apart from English over the period of 10 years (2000 and 2010).

The is
clearly
evident that in the
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year
2010, Spanish was the most spoken foreign
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language
by the British
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students
at the university with 30% in number. After a decade, in 2010, the
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percentage
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increased
by 5%

Apart from Spanish, German and French were
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other
two
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languages
spoken by the
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students
.
However
, the
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percentage
was
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comparitively
lower than Spanish in both the years.

In the
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year
2000, 20% of the
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students
did not speak any
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other
foreign
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language
.
However
, the
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percentage
decreased by 10% in the
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year
2010.

The
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perctage
of
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students
who spoke another
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language
was 15% in the
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year
2000 while it
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increased
by 5% after a decade.
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Similarily
, the
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students
who could speak two or more
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languages
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increased
from 10 to 15% in 2010.

Overall
80% of the
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students
at the university knew
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other
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languages
apart from English which
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increased
over the 10
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year
period leaving
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only
10% of the
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students
monolingual.
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