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he graph below shows average consumption of fresh produce in UK between 1970 and 2030.

he graph below shows average consumption of fresh produce in UK between 1970 and 2030. BLoEw

The chart presents how much people in the United Kingdom eat fresh produce; fruits and vegetables since 1970. The graph states that citizens would have fresh products more and more til the late 90s before there is a decline. However, it would still be growing much more in the early 20s. According to the graph, for the upcoming years after 2015, the analysis predicts that the consumption would take a dip gradually. Starting from the year of 1970, a person would eat around 100 grams. After that, it grew to almost 300 grams in 1990 and then it remained constant over the next few years. Then the amount is reduced to 250 grams in the mid 90s. But it rose again to it’s peak drastically up to 500 grams in the early years of 2000. Thereafter, there was an unstable flows of product consumption until 2015. Since that, there would not be no increasing but only a dropped progress.

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 in the mid 90s.

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