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The chart inllustrates the percentage of employees absent as injury or illness in the first week of July 1999.

The chart inllustrates the percentage of employees absent as injury or illness in the first week of July 1999. pK8PD
The chart illustrates the percentage of employees absent as injury or illness in the first week of July 1999. Overall, all occupations have a percentage of employees on leave over 3% and an average rate of 4. 9%. Firstly, the field having the lowest rate of employees absent is managers and administrators with about 3%. Professional occupations, craft, and related occupations, Associate professional, and selling are four fields that have the rate of absence between 4% to 5%. The specific numbers are respectively Professional occupations with 4, 2%, Craft and related occupations with 4, 4%, and Associate professional and technical with 4, 6%, and Selling with 4, 8%. Finally, the percentage of workers absent in four next fields include Other occupation, Clerical and Sercerarial, Plant and machine operatives, and Personal and protective is higher than profession before, this is between 5% to 6%. The rate of absence are 5, 3%, 5, 6%, 5, 8%, and 6% respectively.
The chart illustrates the percentage of employees absent as injury or illness in the
first
week of July 1999.

Overall
, all
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have a percentage of employees on
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leave
over 3% and an average
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rate
of 4. 9%.

Firstly
, the field having the lowest
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rate
of employees absent is managers and administrators with about 3%.
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Professional
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occupations
, craft, and related
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occupations
, Associate
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professional
, and selling are four fields that have the
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rate
of absence between 4% to 5%. The specific numbers are
respectively
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Professional
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occupations
with 4, 2%, Craft and related
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occupations
with 4, 4%, and Associate
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professional
and technical with 4, 6%, and Selling with 4, 8%.
Finally
, the percentage of workers absent in four
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fields include Other
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occupation
, Clerical and
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Sercerarial
, Plant and machine operatives, and Personal and protective is higher than profession
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before
, this is between 5% to 6%. The
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rate
of absence are 5, 3%, 5, 6%, 5, 8%, and 6%
respectively
.
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