Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.

The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles. 3aWRd
The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including the local - fixed line, the national and international - fixed line, and the mobiles. Overall, the amount of minutes of the local calls was more than the other two types all the periods while usage of the national and international, and the mobiles were increasing. The total minutes of the local calls increased from just over 70 billion minutes in 1995 to the peak at 90 billion minutes in 1999. Even if, it steadily dropped to slightly over 70 billion minutes in 2002 but its total call minutes was still more than the other two types during the periods. The total call minutes of the national and international started from just under 40 billion minutes in 1995 and steadily increased to just over 60 billion minutes in 2002. In the same way, the total call minutes of mobiles slightly grow from under 10 billion minutes in 1995 to over 10 billion minutes in 1999 and it considerably increased to more than 40 billion minutes in 2002.
The chart illustrates the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
total
minutes that the British
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
telephone
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
call
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1995 and 2002".
between 1995 to 2002
in three types including the local
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
line, the national and international
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
line, and the mobiles.

Overall
, the amount of minutes of the local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
calls
was more than the other two types all the periods while usage of the national and international, and the mobiles were increasing.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
total
minutes of the local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
calls
increased from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
over
70
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
minutes in 1995 to the peak at 90
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
minutes in 1999. Even if, it
steadily
dropped to
slightly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
over
70
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
minutes in 2002
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
call
minutes was
still
more than the other two types during the periods.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
call
minutes of the national and international
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
under 40
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
minutes in 1995 and
steadily
increased to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
over
60
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
minutes in 2002.
In the same way
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
call
minutes of mobiles
slightly
grow from under 10
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
minutes in 1995 to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
over
10
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
minutes in 1999 and it
considerably
increased to more than 40
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
minutes in 2002.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.