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The chart gives information about the percentage of visited places (cinema, theatre,library,zoo) in which three groups of Canadian immigrants spend their time.

The chart gives information about the percentage of visited places (cinema, theatre, library, zoo) in which three groups of Canadian immigrants spend their time. BLNx6
The chart gives information about the percentage of visited places (cinema, theatre, library, zoo) in which three groups of Canadian immigrants spend their time. Overall, the higher proportion of new migrants born in English-speaking countries and people born in Canada spend their time visiting at cinema, whereas, migrants who born in other countries spend most of the time like visiting library. However, the less preferred place is theatre. It can be seen that a quarter of people who born in anglophone countries go to see a stage play, while a half of this group prefer to go zoo. The precentage of emigrants born in other countries spending their time in zoo and theatre is lower than other gorups. More than half of migrants born in other countries priorities’ is to visit library and a half of this team’s preference is cinema. Just over 60 percent of people born in English speakimg countries go to see a movie, but 40% of this group like to go library. The large proportion of people who born in Canada choose cinema. In contrary, just 36 percent of this group spend their time in libraries.
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