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The chart belows show the percentage of homes, which had computers, the internet and the broadband internet in australia from 1998 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and, make comparision where relevant.

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The bar graph elucidates the proportion of Australians who had services and gadgets during the period of 1998 to 2008. Calibration of data was measured in the percentage. Overall, the general trend described that the percentage of computers, the internet and the broadband internet, were increased after every year. The trend show that the computers required more than other service. The data have recorded the information of a decade who used the services and gadgets. To commence with, In 2008 the services and gadgets were grew in demand as compared to 1998. In the beginning of 1998, the utilization of the computers were minimum at 40% while it was gradually rose at approximately 95% in the end of 2008. In the contrast, the requirement of internet was decreased in 1998 which was accounted nearby 8% whereas, it was inclined at 60% in 2008. On the other hand, in the starting of 1998, the broadline was not used. However, in 2004, it was begun to utilized nearby 15%. Later, it was on the peak of two-fifth in the year of 2008.

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services
 and gadgets during the period of 1998 to 2008. Calibration of data was measured
 in the percentage.

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described
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used
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 and gadgets.

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services
 and gadgets were Consider using a past participle here: "grown".grown
grew
 in demand as compared to 1998. In the beginning of 1998, the utilization of the computers were minimum at 40% while it was gradually
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rose
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end
 of 2008. In the contrast, the requirement of internet was decreased
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