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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. OVgOE
The pie chart compares the planning of students of anthropology after graduation, and the table illustrates their salary structure after 5 years. Overall, it is clear that the highest number of students want to do a full-time study while the lowest students want to do part-time job and study. However, the most payable jobs are freelance consultants followed by government and private sector jobs. In terms of the pie chart, more than half the population want to pursue post graduate education which is the largest scale whilst an insignificant number of people want to do the part-time job with their studies. Moreover, less than a third of students want to do part-time work, and approximately two-fifth of people want to do full-time work. However, about two-fifth of people unemployed, and the almost same number of students do not know what to do. With regards to table, 40% people earn 75, 000-99, 999$ and 100, 000$ plus as a freelancer. However, the rest 15% earn 50, 000-74, 999$, and only 5% earn 25, 000-49, 999$ as a freelance consultant, and the same amount earn in government sector in this income group. Moreover, the half percentage in government sector earn 100, 000$ plus, and 30% people earn 75, 000-99, 999$. Regarding private companies, 25% to 30% people earn 50, 000$ and above whereas only 10% people earn less than 50, 000$.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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