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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. PVrq2
We have provided with a line graph which hold the information of the median number of British citizens using various transportations like Train, bus and automotive each day between the period 1970 and 2030. To begin with, In 1970 the uk people used car as the highest transportation more than twice compared to rail which stood at last. However the use of train pedicated more than bus and stood at second place in 2030. first is occupied by automotive. From(1970 - 2000) The use of automotive has been rasied between this period starting from nearly 5 millions to 7 millions. On other hand the use of bus in 1970 is two time more than rail nearly 4 millions and train at 2 millions. however in the 2000 the train has been rosed and reached 3 millions. we can see that slightly drop in bus tranport at around 3. 5 millions. From (2000 - 2030) The car and train has been predicated the most usage transportation in 2030. Automotive stood top by around 9 millions travellers and a good growth in railway sector and stood at second place around 5 millions travellers. Travelling through bus has been predicated dropping to 3 millions.
We have provided with a line graph which hold the information of the median number of British citizens using various transportations like
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, bus and automotive each day between the period 1970 and 2030.

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car as the highest transportation more than twice compared to rail which
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train
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more than bus and
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at second place in 2030.
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first
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by automotive.

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1970 - 2000
)

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of automotive has been
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to 7
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. On other hand the
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of bus in 1970 is two time more than rail
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4
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and
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at 2
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in the 2000 the
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and reached 3
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at around 3. 5 millions.

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2000 - 2030
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The car and
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has
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the most usage transportation in 2030. Automotive
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stood
top by around 9
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travellers
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growth in railway sector and
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at second place around 5
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travellers
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dropping to 3
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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