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The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.

The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. awEGd
The given picture illustrates how olive oil is produced. Overall, it is manifest that process of generating olive oil is too long and tendentious. Initially, olive beans are collected from olive tree by the workers. Then, in the next stage olive beans rinished trough cold water. After that beans are putted on the belt before third step. During the third stage, olive stones and olive paste are divided by using smashing machine. In the forth step, olive paste is filled up in a bag which contains holes. In the next stage, olive paste bags are putted in pressure device where pressing process is done by device. Subsequently, bags are transferred in separating machine where water and oil are separated. Water is released and oil filled in bottles and ready to sale.
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picture illustrates how olive
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oil
is produced
.
Overall
, it is manifest that process of generating olive
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oil
is too long and tendentious.
Initially
, olive beans
are collected
from olive tree by the workers. Then, in the
next
stage olive beans
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rinished
trough
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cold
water. After that beans
are putted
on the belt
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before
third step. During the third stage, olive stones and olive paste
are divided
by using smashing machine. In the forth step, olive paste
is filled
up in a bag which contains holes. In the
next
stage, olive paste bags
are putted
in pressure device where pressing process
is done
by device.
Subsequently
, bags
are transferred
in separating machine where water and
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oil
are separated
. Water
is released
and
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oil
filled in bottles and ready to sale.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.

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