Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Explaining the diagram how it Working of Solar water pump

Explaining the diagram how it Working of Solar water pump PVW0w
The diagram explains the way in which working of a Solar water pump. Overall, the work will be in the form of three stages. It starts with how it works at Solar panel photovoltaic cells and ends at how water transfered to a village. Firstly, With the help of Sunlight, Solar panel photovoltaic cells absorbs the Sunlight which again produces DC power and then transmits the DC power supply from panel to underground well. The water in the well get heated using this power supply. However, the water in the well again transfered to a water tank which is at ground level using a bore pump and then the water enters to village.
The diagram
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explains
the way in which working of a Solar
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
pump.

Overall
, the work will be in the form of three stages. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
with how it works at Solar panel photovoltaic cells and ends at how
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "transferred", the past tense form of the verb 'transfer'?
transfered
to a village.

Firstly
, With the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of Sunlight, Solar panel photovoltaic cells absorbs the Sunlight which again produces DC power and then transmits the DC power supply from panel to underground well. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
in the well
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
heated using this power supply.

However
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
in the well again
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "transferred", the past tense form of the verb 'transfer'?
transfered
to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
tank which is at ground level using a bore pump and then the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
enters to village.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Explaining the diagram how it Working of Solar water pump

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
113 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Explaining the diagram how it Working of Solar water pump