Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries Mpee
The bar chart gives information about problems people facing during living abroad in three age categories. One of the most common issues among all age groups is organising money. Middle age people indicated highest 35% among others, and 55s indicated 10% less. Most people have health issues while living in other countries are aged 35-54 and over (37% and 36%). With only 4% difference younger group people are healthier. Lastly, all people have not much difficulties with education. Young and 55 and over years groups are only 6% and 2% with this issue, while percentage of middle age people are almost 10 times higher. To conclude, all kinds of problems face people aged 35-54 more than others, and the medical care is the most common among all age groups.
The bar chart gives information about problems
people
facing during living abroad in three
age
categories. One of the most common issues among all
age
groups
is
organising
money. Middle
age
people
indicated highest 35% among others, and 55s indicated 10% less. Most
people
have health issues while living in other countries
are aged
35-54 and over (37% and 36%). With
only
4% difference younger
group
people
are healthier.
Lastly
, all
people
have not
much
difficulties with education. Young and 55 and over years
groups
are
only
6% and 2% with this issue, while percentage of middle
age
people
are almost 10 times higher.
To conclude
, all kinds of problems face
people
aged 35-54 more than others, and the medical care is the most common among all
age
groups
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts