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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emission person in the United Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emission person in the United Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 88Ek

The line graph depicts the information about the average of carbon dioxide emission s by per person in the different four nations namely United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. the data has been calibrated in metrics of tonnes. At a fleeting glance, it is clearly seen from the line graph that in 1967, 1metric tonnes of CO2 was emitted by an individual. this number increased gradually to 5metric tonnes from 1967 to 1997. this figure was stabled between 1967 and 2007 in portugal. in the initial year above 4matric tonnes of carbon dioxide was emitted in Italy then it increased slightly in1977, then it starts rose continuously and climbed to 8 metrics tonnes. at the end of it remained constant at 79 metric tonnes. Delving deeper into the next details, in Sweden 8metric tonnes of CO2 emitted by per persons in1967. this figure dropped considerably and reached to 7metric tonnes. in the last three years. it showed downward trend. eventually 11metric tonnes of carbon dioxide exhale in the United Kingdom in the former year, This figure remained stable then it declined slowly and reached to7 matric tonnes in the final year. Overall, it can be observed that Italy and Portugal showed an upward trend in the emission of CO2. whereas others countries followed a downward trend during the given time period.

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