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The chart illustrates reasons motivating aldults continue to study. Overall, the main reason why they study is relevant to their hobbies and their work. Acoording to the graph, the most reasons why they choose to study are passionate in that subject and to get a qualification for their work. The percentage is approximate 40%. The important reason are relevant to their carrier and their work. They learn because they want the o to get a better work or improve the promotion. However, also remain a group of person who learn because they enjoy learning, exploring a new knowlege about something. The percentage of this group is from 20% to 23%. Besides, The least common reason is lowest between under 10% and 13% but it indicate some exciting reason. Some people learn because they want to change job and meet new people under 10000 people.
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IELTS academic the chart below shows the results of a survey about the reasons why alduts decide to study

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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