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The bar chart illustrates the number of adult groups who did their primary hobbies in town of Tunisian in the year 1980, 2000 and 2020. It is clear that all seven primary hobbies had a same number of members at the start of period but, then we can see that there were changes in six hobbies. By contrast, the Playing music was only activity which experienced an unchangeable trend over 40 years. In 1980, per primary hobby’ audience' number was 100 adults. However, after 20 years, the TV and movies increased dramatically to 130 and became the most popular hobby. Books and Working out activities stayed second and third places with their 17 and 5 growth respectively. On the other hand, the Playing music had same number as 1980. Baking and Gardening dropped slightly by 5 and 17. Video games showed a significantly decrease to 70 and became the least popular. By, 2020, TV and movies, Books and Working out had rose by 30 approximately 16 and 5 members again. Also, the Playing music unchanged. Following this, Baking, Gardening and the Video games went down from 90 to 67 and 40.

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By, 2020, TV and movies, Books and Working out had rose by 30 approximately 16 and 5 members again. Also
, the Playing music unchanged. Following this, Baking, Gardening and the Video games went down from 90 to 67 and 40. 