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The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts indicate the reasons that users go to work by bicycle or by car. Overall, when we take a look at the charts, we can see that, there are various choices why people travel either by bicycle or by car. There are a number of causes for people to chose bicycle. Primarily, we see that both Health and fitness and less pollution are the first reason with 30 %. Secondly, No parking problems with 15 %. After that No costs and faster than driving are the last reasons with 13 % and 12 % respectively. The reasons for driving to work, unsurprisingly the first reason is Comfort with 40 %. Secondly cause is Distance to wor with 21 %. The figures for both Need to carry things to work and Faster than cycling are the same (14 %). Safer than cycling has 11 %.
The charts indicate the
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that users go to work by bicycle or by car.

Overall
, when we take a look at the charts, we can
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that, there are various choices why
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travel either by bicycle or by car.

There are a number of causes for
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people
to chose bicycle.
Primarily
, we
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see
that both Health and fitness and less pollution are the
first
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with 30 %.
Secondly
, No parking problems with 15 %. After that No costs and faster than driving are the last
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reasons
with 13 % and 12 %
respectively
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The
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reasons
for driving to work,
unsurprisingly
the
first
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reason
is Comfort with 40 %.
Secondly
cause is Distance to
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with 21 %. The figures for both Need to carry things to work and Faster than cycling are the same (14 %). Safer than cycling has 11 %.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
145 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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