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Line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

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The line graph highlights the data regarding the amount of information of food consumption, in three categories of fast food, among Australian youthes between 1975 and 2000. Overall, pizza and humburger became a most common food and these categories increased slightly, while the consumption of fish and chips reduced over the period. To begin with, in 1975 the most popular fast food among Australian teenagers was fish and chips, being eaten 100 times a year. But pizza and humburger were consumed approximately 5 times a year. After that, the consumption of pizza and humburgers increased rapidly, while the amount of fish and chips remained a slight fluctuation in 1985. From 1985 there was a sharp contrast between categories. Especially teenagerd ate humburgers at higher level. As a result it reached at an amount of fish and chips. The second common type of food was pizza recorded at about 80 times. However, the consumption of fish and chips gradually declined over the 25 years to fish at just under 40 times per year.
The line graph highlights the data regarding the amount of information of
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, among Australian
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between 1975 and 2000.
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became a most common
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and these categories increased
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of fish and chips
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food
among Australian
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teenagers
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pizza and
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humburger
were consumed
approximately 5
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. After that, the
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consumption
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humburgers
increased
rapidly
, while the amount of fish and chips remained a slight fluctuation in 1985. From 1985 there was a sharp contrast between categories.
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teenagerd ate
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at higher level.
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was pizza recorded at about 80
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of fish and chips
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IELTS academic Line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

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