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Production of Grain 2010-2030

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The table illustrates the number of million metric tons of grains; wheat, barley, maize, and rice production measured over 5 years simultaneously between 2010-2015 with a future prediction for 2020, 2025 till 2030. The 1st highest grain in production capacity is wheat which showed the largest quantity at 100 million metric tons. Although it increases only 5% in 2015, the demand is still increasing slightly every five years from 2010-2030. Similar manufacturing rate but more dramatic change applied to barley from 50 MMT to 70, 70-80, 80-90, 90-100 MMT gradually in 2010 to 2030. A further projection revealed that in 2030, barley went up to 100MMT which is near to reach wheat 110 MMT. The most stable productivity of grains among four is maize and rice of which the lowest and second-lowest. Rice showed only 34 MMT and 34. 5 MMT in 2010-2015 respectively and keep maintain 35 MMT up to 2030. It can be seen rice is the least popularity in 2010 until 2020 as the production rate held from 24. 7 MMT in 2010 and dropped to 25. 5 in 2030. Overall, it is clear that wheat and barley are the most favored grains. In contrast, maize and rice are less popular grains.
The table illustrates the number of million metric tons of
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grains
;
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wheat
,
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barley
, maize, and
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rice
production measured over 5 years
simultaneously
between 2010-2015 with a future prediction for 2020, 2025 till 2030. The 1st highest
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grain
in production capacity is
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wheat
which
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showed
the largest quantity at 100 million metric tons. Although it increases
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only
5% in 2015, the demand is
still
increasing
slightly
every five years from 2010-2030. Similar manufacturing rate
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but
more dramatic
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change
applied to
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barley
from 50 MMT to 70, 70-80, 80-90, 90-100 MMT
gradually
in 2010 to 2030. A
further
projection revealed that in 2030,
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barley
went up to 100MMT which is near to reach
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wheat
110 MMT. The most stable productivity of
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grains
among four is maize and
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rice
of which the lowest and second-lowest.
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Rice
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showed
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only
34 MMT and 34. 5 MMT in 2010-2015
respectively
and
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keep
maintain 35 MMT up to 2030. It can be
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seen
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rice
is the least popularity in 2010 until 2020 as the production rate held from 24. 7 MMT in 2010 and dropped to 25. 5 in 2030.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that
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wheat
and
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barley
are the most favored
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grains
.
In contrast
, maize and
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rice
are less popular
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grains
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