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The chart below shows the percentage of electricity produced and consumed in various countries in 2014

The chart below shows the percentage of electricity produced and consumed in various countries in 2014 Jw8P5
The bar chart clearly illustrates the production and consumption of Electricity(in billion kWh) across various countries in the year 2014. Overall, maximum current was produced and used by china. In contrast, minimum amount of electricity was both utilised and produced in Korea. In 2014, China Ranks the highest in producing 5, 398 billion kWh of power. In addition to it, China also stood in the first place in consuming almost equal power it produced. This reflects the fact that China is having the highest population among all the countries. United states took the second place in both production(4099 billion kWh) and consumption(3866 billion kWh) whereas Russia, Japan, India were in third, fourth, fifth place respectively generating (936. 2, 817, 618) billion kwh and using (856. 7, 698, 499)billion Kwh. Canada ranked next to India with a slight difference in both electricity production and consumption with respect to india. After canada, france and Brazil took the seventh and eigth positions in both production(561. 2 BKwh) and utilization(462. 9 Bkwh) of electrical energy. Further Germany consumes 582. 5 Bkwh of energy but produces only 526. 6 Bkwh. All in all Korea is the only country that generates(485. 1 BKwh) and consumes(449. 5 BKwh) least amount of electrical energy.
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production
and consumption of Electricity(in
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billion
kWh) across various countries in the year 2014.

Overall
, maximum
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current
was produced
and
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used
by china.
In contrast
, minimum amount of electricity was both
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utilised
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and


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produced
in Korea.

In 2014, China Ranks the highest in producing 5, 398
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billion
kWh of power.
In addition
to it, China
also
stood in the
first
place in consuming almost
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equal


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power
it produced. This reflects the fact that China is having the highest population among all the countries.

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United states
took the second place in both
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production(4099
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billion
kWh) and consumption(3866
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kWh) whereas Russia, Japan, India were in third, fourth, fifth place
respectively
generating (936. 2, 817, 618)
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billion
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kwh
and using (856. 7, 698,
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499)billion
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Kwh
.

Canada ranked
next
to India with a slight difference in both electricity
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production
and consumption with respect to
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india
.

After
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canada
,
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france
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eigth
positions in both
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production(561
. 2
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BKwh
) and utilization(462. 9
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Bkwh
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of energy
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526. 6
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country that generates(485. 1
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