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The chart below shows the percentage change in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality.

The chart below shows the percentage change in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality. aADLo
The line chart given compares the proportion of people under 18 who seized in three areas, namely suburban, rural and urban between 1995 and 1998. Overall, the figure for criminals decreased in each area over the period shown. Suburban areas had a period of instability while urban witnessed a through for crime arrest. Based on the statistics, crimes in suburban areas stood at 2% in 1995, whereas almost 1% and 2% of urban and rural areas teenagers committed crimes. Over the next year these, numbers had drastic changes. For example, suburban areas reached a peak with 8% then dramatically fell to just nearly -2% in 1997, while the trend of rural and urban areas dropped simultaneously.
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compares the proportion of
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people
under 18 who seized in three
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areas
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suburban
, rural and
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between 1995 and 1998.

Overall
, the figure for criminals decreased in each
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area
over the period shown.
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Suburban
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areas
had a period of instability while
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urban
witnessed a through for crime arrest.

Based on the statistics, crimes in
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suburban
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areas
stood at 2% in 1995, whereas almost 1% and 2% of
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urban
and rural
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areas
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teenagers
committed crimes. Over the
next
year these, numbers had drastic
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changes
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suburban
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areas
reached a peak with 8% then
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fell to
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just
nearly
-2% in 1997, while the trend of rural and
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urban
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dropped
simultaneously
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage change in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality.

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