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The chart below shows the number of homes built in a specific part of the UK and also shows expectation for 2020.

The chart below shows the number of homes built in a specific part of the UK and also shows expectation for 2020. G9VK2
The line graph illustrates the number of houses in a specific consist of the UK and also below expectation for 2020. Overall, it is evident that a considerable incline in each category given except for flats and semi detached homes. Moreover the terraced homes category showed by for the decreases and semi detached homes As it can be observed from the first diagram the highest profit came from flats building from 1000 to 2800 between 2010 to 2020 then detached home to jumped that time terraced homes significantly declined and semi detached homes to flactuated between 2010 and 2020
The line graph illustrates the number of
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houses
in a specific consist of the UK and
also
below expectation for 2020.

Overall
, it is evident that a considerable incline in each category
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given
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except for
flats and semi
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detached
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homes
.
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Moreover
the terraced
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homes
category
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showed
by for the decreases and semi
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detached
homes

As it can
be observed
from the
first
diagram the highest profit came from flats building from 1000 to 2800
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between 2010 to 2020
then
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detached
home to jumped that time terraced
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homes
significantly
declined and semi
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detached
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homes
to
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flactuated
between 2010 and 2020

IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of homes built in a specific part of the UK and also shows expectation for 2020.

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