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Many teachers believe that homework contributes greatly to the student’s academic success. Do you agree with this point of view?

Many teachers believe that homework contributes greatly to the student’s academic success. Do you agree with this point of view? RRxK8
I agree with this statement, the homework contributes greatly to the student’s academic success for some important reasons. To illustrate this I will begin with, I believe that homework is a very important, essential and a vital factor for students because, according to some important investigations with it, students can be better and clever. And on the other hand they could probably form a better personality. In addition as an example, homework support them to form a better character. Also, and more important, homework helps students to remember better all the topics seen in the classroom for done an example. How we know, the evidence about it is positive. According to these reasons I stronger agree with this statement, I trust, and I recommend that, we need continuing leaving homework to the students so that they will be more successful in the future.
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IELTS academic Many teachers believe that homework contributes greatly to the student’s academic success. Do you agree with this point of view?

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143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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