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The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrated the number of female students per 100 male ones studying in 3 levels of campus education. Overall, it was evident that the number of girls experiences a stable increase at all three schools. Although, female students in developed countries remained dominant in the given time. In primary education, female youngsters saw four girls rise per 100 boys in developing countries from 83 to 87 girls. In comparison with developed countries, it had a modest increase with just one girl to 96 girls. In secondary school, female students were fewer by 11 girls in 1990 than that in primary school and then increased to 82 girls in the next eight years. In secondary school, the ratio for girl students is reached to balance with that of boys. It was apparent that girls showed the least interest in tertiary education with the lowest number, it was just 66 and 75 girls in 1990 and 1998 respectively. In contrast, developed countries saw an upward trend to get over the target to reach a peak at 112 girls.
The bar chart illustrated the number of
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female
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students
per 100 male ones studying in 3 levels of campus education.

Overall
, it was evident that the number of
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girls
experiences a stable increase at all three
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schools
.
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Although
,
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female
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students
in developed
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countries
remained dominant in the
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given
time.

In primary education,
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female
youngsters
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saw
four
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girls
rise per 100 boys in developing
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countries
from 83 to 87
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girls
.
In comparison
with developed
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countries
, it had a modest increase with
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just
one
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girl
to 96
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girls
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In
secondary
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school
,
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female
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students
were fewer by 11
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girls
in 1990 than that in primary
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school
and then increased to 82
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girls
in the
next
eight years.
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In
secondary
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school
, the ratio for
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girl
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students
is reached
to balance with that of boys.

It was apparent that
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girls
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showed
the least interest in tertiary education with the lowest number, it was
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just
66 and 75
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girls
in 1990 and 1998
respectively
.
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, developed
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countries
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saw
an upward trend to
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get
over the target to reach a peak at 112
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girls
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education.

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178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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