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The chart below shows the energy (million units) generated by wind in four different countries in 1985 and 2000

The chart below shows the energy (million units) generated by wind in four different countries in 1985 and 2000 ElQER
A glance at the bar graphs illustrates the wind energy (million units) generated in four countries in 1985 and 2000. Overall, while there were upward trends in the figures of India, Denmark and the US, Germany witnessed an opposite trend. The wind energy in the US was predominant over the past years. It is notable to see that the amount of wind energy in the US and Denmark markedly grew. With reference to Denmark, it was recorded the country with the least generation during the period, subsequently experiencing a twofold rise to peak at 20 in 2000. By contrast, the US came in 1st place in both years, with around 120 and 140 making it by far higher than other countries. Additionally, in 2000, it can be seen that there was a striking difference between two above-mentioned countries while the figure of the US was about 7 times as much as Denmark. Interestingly, while India saw a moderate growth, Germany fell gradually. Looking at the given information, in 1985, the figure of India was approximately a half of that in Germany when these two countries ranked at 3rd and 2nd position accordingly. Despite the opposition in their patterns, both countries levelled out at the same point, which was about 42 in 2000.
A glance at the bar graphs illustrates the wind energy (million units) generated in four
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in 1985 and 2000.

Overall
, while there were upward trends in the figures of India, Denmark and the US, Germany witnessed an opposite trend. The wind energy in the US was predominant over the past years.

It is notable to
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that the amount of wind energy in the US and Denmark
markedly
grew. With reference to Denmark, it
was recorded
the
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with the least generation during the period,
subsequently
experiencing a twofold rise to peak at 20 in 2000. By contrast, the US came in 1st place in both years, with around 120 and 140 making it by far higher than other
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countries
.
Additionally
, in 2000, it can be
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seen
that there was a striking difference between two above-mentioned
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countries
while the figure of the US was about 7 times as much as Denmark.

Interestingly
, while India
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saw
a moderate growth, Germany fell
gradually
. Looking at the
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given
information, in 1985, the figure of India was approximately a half of that in Germany when these two
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countries
ranked at 3rd and 2nd position
accordingly
. Despite the opposition in their patterns, both
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levelled out at the same point, which was about 42 in 2000.
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