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Hamlet is a typical character for a person with undying strength, reproduced through the pen of the famous playwright Shakespeare.

Hamlet is a typical character for a person with undying strength, reproduced through the pen of the famous playwright Shakespeare. KleP0
Hamlet is a typical character for a person with undying strength, reproduced through the pen of the famous playwright Shakespeare. As a prince, he was supposed to live in luxurious circumstances and enjoy a happy life, but the corruptness of society at that time pushed him to the tragedies of life, the tragedy right in his personality. Suffering after realizing the truth about his father's death due to his uncle's murder, anger and confusion witnessed his mother's remarriage, resentment, and doubts about his mother's love for his father. Because he is a person with wisdom, capable of finding the truth and realizing his own ability. That makes him more miserable, because the deeper his intelligence, the more haunting insecurity is clearly shown through his inner paradoxes, psychological torment for a long time, pretending to be madness, and giving up the love of his life. Unable to express his grief and dumbfounded heart, the author portrayed a multi-dimensional Hamlet of a person with different emotional frames, confusion, pain before the present. Therefore, in the most important moments, he hesitated and was indecisive for fear of the consequences, so he caused catastrophic tragedies with six deaths from relatives, enemies, and even himself. His death was like being released from a dark prison, the misfortunes he had experienced to keep his promise to avenge his father. However, it is in that social situation full of confusion and complications that Hamlet still asserts his heroic ideal, not only concerned with the duty of revenge but also most concerned with dignity, and the way of human life. In Hamlet, Shakespeare conveyed a dream of the times, a hope of a peaceful society without evil people.
Hamlet is a typical character for a person with undying strength, reproduced through the pen of the
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famous
playwright Shakespeare. As a prince, he
was supposed
to
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live
in luxurious circumstances and enjoy a happy
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life
,
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but
the corruptness of society at that time pushed him to the tragedies of
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life
, the tragedy right in his personality. Suffering after realizing the truth about his father's death due to his uncle's murder, anger and confusion witnessed his mother's remarriage, resentment, and doubts about his mother's
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love
for his father.
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Because
he is a person with wisdom, capable of finding the truth and realizing his
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own
ability. That
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makes
him more miserable,
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because
the deeper his intelligence, the more haunting insecurity is
clearly
shown through his inner paradoxes, psychological torment for a long time, pretending to be madness, and giving up the
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love
of his
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life
. Unable to express his grief and dumbfounded heart, the author portrayed a multi-dimensional Hamlet of a person with
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different
emotional frames, confusion, pain
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before
the present.
Therefore
, in the most
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important
moments, he hesitated and was indecisive for fear of the consequences,
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so
he caused catastrophic tragedies with six deaths from relatives, enemies, and even himself. His death was like
being released
from a dark prison, the misfortunes he had experienced to
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keep
his promise to avenge his father.
However
, it is in that social situation full of confusion and complications that Hamlet
still
asserts his heroic ideal, not
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only
concerned with the duty of revenge
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but
also
most concerned with dignity, and the way of human
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life
. In Hamlet, Shakespeare conveyed a dream of the times, a hope of a peaceful society without evil
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people
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IELTS academic Hamlet is a typical character for a person with undying strength, reproduced through the pen of the famous playwright Shakespeare.

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