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The chart below shows the amount of oil produced and consumed in China between 1982 and 2006.

The chart below shows the amount of oil produced and consumed in China between 1982 and 2006. AJ2w1
The line graph compares how much oil was produced and consumed in China over a period of 24 years starting from 1982 to 2006. It is clear that both oil production and consumption experience upward trends over the given period. As can be seen at the starting point of the period (1982), China manufactured approximately 2 million barrels each day, which was mildly more than the quantity of oil consumed. From 1982 to 1994, the production of oil grow moderately by 1 million barrels, but later remain unchanged at 3 million barrels till the end of the period. Meanwhile, there was a steady rise to around 2 million barrels in oil manufacture, which was followed by a marginal upturn of 3. 5 million barrels in the same period. Looking at the graph in more detail, the amount of oil produced climb significantly and peaked at approximately 6 million barrels in 2006. While a gradual increase of 0. 5 million barrels was witnessed in the oil consumption between 1994 and 2006. At the ending point of the period (2006), the amount of oil consumed more than produced is 2. 7 million barrels.
The line graph compares how much
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oil
was produced
and consumed in China over a
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period
of 24 years starting from 1982 to 2006.

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clear
that both
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oil
production and consumption experience upward trends over the
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period.

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seen
at the starting point of the
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(1982), China manufactured approximately 2
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million
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barrels
each day, which was
mildly
more than the quantity of
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oil
consumed. From 1982 to 1994, the production of
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grow
moderately
by 1
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million
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barrels
,
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but
later remain unchanged at 3
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million
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barrels
till the
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end
of the
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period
. Meanwhile, there was a steady rise to around 2
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million
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barrels
in
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manufacture, which
was followed
by a marginal upturn of 3. 5
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million
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barrels
in the same period.

Looking at the graph in more detail, the amount of
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produced climb
significantly
and peaked at approximately 6
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million
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barrels
in 2006.
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a gradual increase of 0. 5
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million
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barrels
was witnessed
in the
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oil
consumption between 1994 and 2006. At the ending point of the
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period
(2006), the amount of
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consumed more than produced is 2. 7
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million
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barrels
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the amount of oil produced and consumed in China between 1982 and 2006.

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