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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

The bar chart illustrates how much many expended on various fast foods by three different social groups in 1990. The line graph demonstrates how combustion of these foods was changed from 1970 to 1990. Overall, a hamburger was the most popular among people in Britain in 1990, exception group of people with low income where most of the expended money accounted for fish and chips. As for the consumption of fast foods in grams, eating proportions of Hamburgers and Fish & Chips had exponentially increased, whereas a figure for Pizza declined over the time. Regarding to the expenditure on Fast food, High and Average income groups spent 45 and almost 33 pence per person accordingly. The highest expenditure of money in low income group took fish & Chips, which is around 17 pence for each person. In terms of consumption of fast food, it is interesting to see that the growth of the two types of fast foods, Fish % chips and Hamburger, was constant and reached 560 g, almost 300 g respectively at the end of the period. The figure for the latter food in 1990 was almost the same with data about pizza in 1970. Consumption of pizza remained almost the between 1980 and 1990, which was 200.

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