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The chart below shows part of the results of an extensive public survey on people's attitude to a range of issues.

The chart below shows part of the results of an extensive public survey on people's attitude to a range of issues. w7BAq
The graphs illustrate the answers of an extensive public survey on people’s opinion about public services issues. It can be clearly seen that people willing to pay high taxes to improve the public services such as education, health, and public transport and education receive most of agreements. Looking at the detail, over 50% of people agree on raising the taxes to pay for social services, especially education with nearly three quarters votes, compared to 40% agreement on health and a tiny minority of 10% supporters for public transportation. On the other side, almost one half of people oppose the idea of increasing taxes to support public services. Public transport receives a massive 85% of disagreement, dwarfing the figures for Health and Education, 30% and 20% respectively. Only a small minority of 10% people show their neutrality of taxes increase for social service investment. In terms of public transport and education investment, there is an insignificant amount of people refuse to clarify their attitude, meanwhile almost a third of inexplicit answers were account for Health investment question.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows part of the results of an extensive public survey on people's attitude to a range of issues.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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