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Some people feel that the tradition of family dinner time is disappearing, and parents and children rarely sit together to eat meal during the day. What is the reason of this change and what may be consequences? Give explanations and examples from your own experience.

Some people feel that the tradition of family dinner time is disappearing, and parents and children rarely sit together to eat meal during the day. What is the reason of this change and what may be consequences? Give explanations and examples from your own experience. PgaXB
From antiquated time nuclear families have been following a custom of sitting together on dining table to have dinner. But, in current scenario this prolonged tradition of eating together with family is vanishing. As per my opinion busy work and study schedules of parents and children respectively is the main reason, due to which this tradition is fading. Repercussions of decline in this practice are lack of bonding among the family members and increase in health issues. To provide a better lifestyle of their kindred, nowadays, parents are bound to work for ten to twelve hours a day for which they leave the home early and come back late night. On the other hand, as the competition is surging, either students attend tuition classes or they participate in extracurricular activities like, sports, arts etcetera till late. This rein them to eat dinner together with their entire family and encourages them to have meal as per their preferred timing. I can recall from my childhood that my parents were in the habit of eating dinner at 7. 00 PM, but I would not able to come back to home before 8. 30 PM from my tuition classes, and this way I always missed the opportunity to consume meal along-with my family members. Not eating food with the kindred leads to deprivation of family-bonding and health issues. Eating food together with entire family gives a chance to share our emotions, problems, success and experiences with family. Lack of which family-members feel disconnected from their family, demotivated and furthermore, this leads to depression. I hardly remember about the profession of my parents and even never shared my problems with them. In conclusion, due to busy lifestyle of family-members, they skip to have meal together with their family and eat the same as per their convenience, which results into lack of empathy among the kindred-members and furthermore, many health issues.
From antiquated time nuclear
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have been following a custom of sitting together on dining table to have dinner.
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, in
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current
scenario this prolonged tradition of
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eating
together with
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family
is vanishing. As per my opinion busy work and study schedules of
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parents
and children
respectively
is the main reason, due to which this tradition is fading. Repercussions of decline in this practice are lack of bonding among the
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family
members and increase in health issues.

To provide a better lifestyle of their kindred, nowadays,
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parents
are bound
to work for ten to twelve hours a day for which they
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leave
the home early and
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come
back late night.
On the other hand
, as the competition is surging, either students attend tuition classes or they participate in extracurricular activities like, sports, arts etcetera till late. This rein them to eat dinner together with their entire
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
and encourages them to have meal as per their preferred timing. I can recall from my childhood that my
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parents
were in the habit of
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eating
dinner at 7. 00 PM,
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but
I would not able to
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come
back to home
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before
8. 30 PM from my tuition classes, and this way I always missed the opportunity to consume meal along-with my
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family
members.

Not
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eating
food with the kindred leads to deprivation of family-bonding and health issues.
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Eating
food together with entire
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family
gives a chance to share our emotions, problems, success and experiences with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
. Lack of which family-members feel disconnected from their
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family
, demotivated and
furthermore
, this leads to depression. I hardly remember about the profession of my
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parents
and even never shared my problems with them.

In conclusion
, due to busy lifestyle of family-members, they skip to have meal together with their
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family
and eat the same as per their convenience, which results into lack of empathy among the kindred-members and
furthermore
,
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many
health issues.
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IELTS academic Some people feel that the tradition of family dinner time is disappearing, and parents and children rarely sit together to eat meal during the day. What is the reason of this change and what may be consequences? Give explanations and examples from your own experience.

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