Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

the chart below show the proportion of regular smokers in Englands in 2019 by gender and age

the chart below show the proportion of regular smokers in Englands in 2019 by gender and age l7AXw
the bar charts give information about the percentage of people who regulated smokes in England in 2019 by gender and ageOverall, both groups of men and womenhave a similarity that they smoke a lot of when thay are young and decrease as thet get olderNervertheless, the age of smoking with the highest percentage iss still from 25 to 34 years old withthe men is 28 proportion and the women iss 22 proportion about 3-5 percent higher/than the youngest age and 16-22 percent higher than the oldest ageThe smoking rate off men is always higher than or equal to that of women, the only exception being at the age of from 65 to 74 that women are less than men a tiny portionOn the other hand, we can see in two groups when they get olders their smoking rate isequal to anf the difference a very small proportion. For exam, when thay 55-64 years old and 75 years old over then the rate smoking on the gender iss the same with 15 percent and 5 percent
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
bar charts give information about the percentage of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who regulated smokes in England in 2019 by gender and
Possible spelling mistake found.
ageOverall
, both groups of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
and
Possible spelling mistake found.
womenhave
a similarity that they smoke
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
when
Possible spelling mistake found.
thay
are young and decrease as
Possible spelling mistake found.
thet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
Possible spelling mistake found.
olderNervertheless
, the age of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
smoking
with the highest percentage
Possible spelling mistake found.
iss
still
from 25 to 34 years
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
Possible spelling mistake found.
withthe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
is 28 proportion and the women
Possible spelling mistake found.
iss
22 proportion about 3-5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percent
higher/than the youngest age and 16-22
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percent
higher than the oldest
Possible spelling mistake found.
ageThe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
smoking
rate off
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
is always higher than or equal to that of women, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
exception being at the age of from 65 to 74 that women are less than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
a tiny
Possible spelling mistake found.
portionOn
the other hand, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
in two groups when they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
Possible spelling mistake found.
olders
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
smoking
rate
Possible spelling mistake found.
isequal
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
anf
the difference a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
proportion. For exam, when
Possible spelling mistake found.
thay
55-64 years
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
and 75 years
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
over then the rate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
smoking
on the gender
Possible spelling mistake found.
iss
the same with 15
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percent
and 5
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
percent
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic the chart below show the proportion of regular smokers in Englands in 2019 by gender and age

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • the chart below show the proportion of regular smokers in Englands in 2019 by gender and age