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The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart describes about the qualification of people in the science stream between Malaysia and Singapore. Overall, through these given statistics. We can clearly observe that in Malaysia large of population does not have no qualification in the science compare to Singapore. According to figure, in Malaysia above 30 per cent of people have the school leaving exam education level where as in the Singapore show only 30 per cent of people have high school level qualification. in case of undergraduate’s level Malaysia was over taken by Singapore. Singapore shows approximately 20 per cent people have bachelor’s degree where in Malaysia only half the population are qualified the undergraduates level. Furthermore, when we see the master level qualification Singapore and Malaysia are now in the same space which is about 3 per cent of population are qualified in the post-graduation level. But observing the high level qualification Malaysian people show 63 per cent pass the school exam but in case of Singapore only 60 per cent of the population Singapore pass the school level
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in the science compare to Singapore.

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approximately 20 per cent
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the master
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Singapore and Malaysia are
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

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6.0
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