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The graph below shows the number of medals won by the top 5 countries Norway, United States, Germany, Russia and Canada in the summer and winter Olympics.

The graph below shows the number of medals won by the top 5 countries Norway, United States, Germany, Russia and Canada in the summer and winter Olympics. m3PJN
The bar chat graph illustrates the amount of awards merited by the first 5 nations in the summer and winter athletic games. Overall it can be seen that Norway got the highest award amongst the top 5 countries; Norway, United States, Germany, Russia and Canada with Russia as the least. To start with amongst the 5 nations Norway, United States and Germany topped the graph with Norway as the highest. Norway athletes won 150 gold, above 250 silver and alittle below 400 bronze. On the other hand, United States sports players won 100 gold, alittle below 250 silver and 300 bronze. Likewise Germany nation with 100 gold, 200 silver and approximately 250 bronze. In contrast, Russia and Canada were countries with the least countries with least achievement. Russia and Canada had similar earnings with gold 100, 150 silver and 200 bronze with Canada topping the graph at the end of the olympic games.
The bar chat graph illustrates the amount of awards merited by the
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5 nations in the summer and winter athletic games.

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that Norway
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the highest award amongst the top 5 countries; Norway, United States, Germany, Russia and Canada with Russia as the least.

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with amongst the 5 nations Norway, United States and Germany topped the graph with Norway as the highest.
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Norway athletes
won 150 gold, above 250
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and
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alittle
below 400 bronze.
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, United States sports players won 100 gold,
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below 250
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silver
and 300 bronze.
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Germany nation with 100 gold, 200
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and approximately 250 bronze.

In contrast
, Russia and Canada were countries with the least countries with
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achievement. Russia and Canada had similar earnings with gold 100, 150
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silver
and 200 bronze with Canada topping the graph at the
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end
of the
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