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The bar graph shows the some houses built per 1 year in different towns Farkletown or Newtown in past century.

The bar graph shows the some houses built per 1 year in different towns Farkletown or Newtown in past century. 3bnrb
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the number of houses built per year in two various towns such as Farkletown or Newtown in the previous century. Overall, the number of accommodation built in Newtown was fluctuations in upward trend, While the number of houses built in Farkletown was upward trend. In 1900, the Newtown space was built approximately 50 and it was grewup 60 in 1910. Newtown contraction was upward trend with some minor fluctuations. However, the number of accommodation built was gradually increased from 1920 to 1950. Noticeably, the highest houses built approximately 260 in 1990 at Newtown. Moving towards, the construction built in Farkletown Which was upward trend during 1900 to 1990. Next, the number of houses contractions stay steadly between 1930 and 1970. Then, it was suddenly boosted from 120 houses in 1970 to almost 350 accommodation in 1990. Subsequently, the Farkletown's bangllows built was higher than the Newtown accommodation.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the
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built per year in two various towns such as
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Farkletown
or
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Newtown
in the previous century.

Overall
, the
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number
of
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accommodation
built in
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Newtown
was fluctuations in upward trend, While the
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number
of
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houses
built in
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Farkletown
was upward trend.

In 1900, the
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Newtown
space
was built
approximately 50 and it was
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grewup
60 in 1910.
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Newtown
contraction was upward trend with
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some
minor fluctuations.
However
, the
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number
of
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accommodation
built was
gradually
increased from 1920 to 1950.
Noticeably
, the highest
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houses
built approximately 260 in 1990 at
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Newtown
.

Moving towards, the construction built in
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Farkletown
Which was upward trend during 1900 to 1990.
Next
, the
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number
of
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houses
contractions stay
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steadly
between 1930 and 1970. Then, it was
suddenly
boosted from 120
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houses
in 1970 to almost 350
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accommodation
in 1990.
Subsequently
, the
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Farkletown
's
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bangllows
built was higher than the
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Newtown
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accommodation
.
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IELTS academic The bar graph shows the some houses built per 1 year in different towns Farkletown or Newtown in past century.

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