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The bar chart illustrates the number of houses built every year in different towns Freetown or Newtown in past century.

The bar chart illustrates the number of houses built every year in different towns Freetown or Newtown in past century. XqYdN
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the number of houses built per year in two various towns such as Freetown or New town in the previous century. Overall, the number of accommodation built in New town was fluctuations in upward trend, Whereas the number of houses built in Carleton was upward trend. In 1900, the New town space was built approximately 50 and it was grown up 60 in 1910. New town contraction was upward trend with some minor fluctuations. However, the number of accommodation built was gradually increased from 1920 to 1950. Noticeably, the highest houses built approximately 260 in 1990 at New town. Moving towards, the construction built in Carleton Which was upward trend during 1900 to 1990. Next, the number of houses contractions stay steady between 1930 and 1970. Then, it was suddenly boosted from 120 houses in 1970 to almost 350 accommodation in 1990. Subsequently, the Freetown's bungalows built was higher than the New town accommodation.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the
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in the previous century.

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built in
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town
was fluctuations in upward trend, Whereas the
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of
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houses
built in Carleton was upward trend.

In 1900, the
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New
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town
space
was built
approximately 50 and it
was grown
up 60 in 1910.
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New
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contraction was upward trend with
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some
minor fluctuations.
However
, the
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number
of
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accommodation
built was
gradually
increased from 1920 to 1950.
Noticeably
, the highest
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houses
built approximately 260 in 1990 at
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New
town.

Moving towards, the construction built in Carleton Which was upward trend during 1900 to 1990.
Next
, the
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number
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houses
contractions stay steady between 1930 and 1970. Then, it was
suddenly
boosted from 120
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in 1970 to almost 350
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accommodation
in 1990.
Subsequently
, the Freetown's bungalows built was higher than the
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town
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accommodation
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the number of houses built every year in different towns Freetown or Newtown in past century.

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