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The bar graph shows that the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The bar graph shows that the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. kdPM
The bar graph shows that the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Overall, it is clear that city residents went to cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks more than bought fresh coffee or istant coffee. Looking at the graph more closely, over 60 percentage of city residents went to a cafe for coffee or tea in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobarts. On the other hands, under 35 percentage of city residents bought fresh coffee in Brisbane and Adelaide. In four cities expect Adelaide, the most city residents went to a cafe for coffe or tea. In contrast, city residents bought instant coffee the most in Adelaide.
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buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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that city
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in last 4 weeks more than
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Looking at the graph more
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, over 60 percentage of city
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in Sydney, Melbourne and
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Hobarts
. On the other hands, under 35 percentage of city
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in Brisbane and Adelaide. In four
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Adelaide, the most city
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the most in Adelaide.

IELTS academic The bar graph shows that the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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