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The bar graph shows European countries` populations in 2007.

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The bar graph shows European countries` populations in 2007. There are 11 European countries in total and six countries (Belgium, Bulgaria, Czech Republic, Denmark, Ireland and Greece) have between nearly 5 million and more than 10 million. In Spain, approximately 45 million people live according to a figure. Next, in France, there is more population than in Italy with just under 65 million and 60 million respectively. Estonia has some million populations and this country has the fewest population in the graph. Differently, Germany has more than 80 million people and this country has the most assertive index.
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in 2007. There are 11 European
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in total and six
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(Belgium, Bulgaria, Czech Republic, Denmark, Ireland and Greece) have between
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. In Spain, approximately 45
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than in Italy with
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has the fewest
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has the most assertive index.

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