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The bar charts show the amount of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and the percentage of the marital status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000.

The bar charts show the amount of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and the percentage of the marital status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000. MM33k
The bar charts show the amount of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and the percentage of the marital status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000. Overall, the number of marriages slightly dropped and the number of divorces was around a half of the number of marriages. When comparing the marital status in 1970 and 2000, the percentage of married and widowed were decreasing, whereas the percentage of the never married and divorced were increasing. The amount of people who were marriages in 1970 and 1980 were staying constant at 2. 5 million people, after that it slightly dropped to 2 million people in 2000. The amount of divorces started at 1 million people in 1970 and it increased to nearly 1. 5 million people in 1980, and then it slightly dropped to 1 million people in 2000. When comparing the proportion of marital status in 1970 and 2000. The married fallen from 70% to nearly 60% and the widowed was decreasing around 1%. On the other hand, the never married and the divorced increased from around 15% to 20% and from around 2% to nearly 10% respectively.
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and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and the percentage of the marital status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000.

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marriages
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dropped and the number of divorces was
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around
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marriages
. When comparing the marital status in 1970 and 2000, the percentage of married and widowed were decreasing, whereas the percentage of the never married and divorced were increasing.

The amount of
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who were
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in 1970 and 1980 were staying constant at 2. 5
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, after that it
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in 2000. The amount of divorces
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in 1970 and it increased to
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million
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people
in 1980, and then it
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people
in 2000.

When comparing the proportion of marital status in 1970 and 2000. The married fallen from 70% to
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60% and the widowed was decreasing
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around
1%.
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, the never married and the divorced increased from
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2% to
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IELTS academic The bar charts show the amount of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and the percentage of the marital status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000.

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