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the bar chart shows changes in percentage of households with cars in 1 european country

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To begin with, in the year 1971 approximately 50% families didn't have a car, but after that there was a steady decline from 50% down to about 40% and then hit its lowest point of under 30%. While the house with 1 car had a slight decreased in 1981, but later it went up dramatically and hit its peak in 1991, followed by a marginal fell in the last year. In the meantime, two other catergories dropped.

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